Sunday, 20 October 2013

Mrs Fernandez - Planning Feedback

Well done, your concept development has come on significantly in the last two weeks and we were impressed with some of your visual ideas and enthusiasm for your concept in your pitch.  Your blog does have some L4 research at this stage, particularly the audience feedback, some of the print analysis and collaborative posts.  However, it is not yet consistently L4.  In order to achieve this, which is more than do-able, you now need to do the following:

1. Review technical analysis (JP missing?) and video analysis - at the end of each post, reflect clearly how this then links to your concept development - what can you take from that research process?
2. This same observation needs to be made on audience research, Brighton, mood boards, in fact any process you do such as a recce or practice shots.  LINK explicitly back to your concept
3. Technical analysis summaries not detailed enough
4. JP - missing tech analysis?  Also Print analysis needs semiotics used explicitly
5. CC - video analysis - needs more detail for media language questions
6. Location recce - needs to be done ASAP with visuals
7. video clip for practice projection shots

1 comment:

  1. My Technical Analysis reflection has now been extended.
    Group Recce and the attachment of our projection shots should be added today.

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