Monday, 18 November 2013

Mrs Fernandez - feedback 2

You have some excellent visual ideas, however at this stage you are short of footage.  You need to select all the usable takes and take a time check on how much you need to add still, plus contingency for when you take the cutting rate up.

You now need to post a list of shots that you plan to do - I can't see evidence of that on the blog - both in the studio and woodlands

I'd also like to see a treatment for your concept - what is this video about?  How does it all link together?

These are vital planning aspects for L4. On reviewing your blog, there are various aspects at L3 still and I'm concerned about how Chris/Joey have missed the print deadline?  Please post up the full analysis of your print mock-ups, stating where they would be published and deconstructing them.  See me for details.


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